时当月色亮点分析：表示感激的句型：I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you.
Thanks again for taking care of me so well.
[高分句型一]
I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in communicating with others in English. 我永远不会忘记，当我用英语和别人交流困难时，你主动提出帮助我。句子中有when引导的时间状语从句。
[高分句型二]
Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.” 住在您们家里就像住在我自己的家里一样，这让我想起了一句话：“天下之大, 家最美好。” 其中which reminds me of the saying是由which引导的定语从句。
18．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达。
现在各行各业都在为建设美丽中国，实现中国梦而奋斗．请根据下列图示，谈谈以下几种职业怎样做贡献的．作为学生，你又该怎么办？
要求：1、短文需包含提示要点，并适当发挥；
2、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3、语句通顺，结构合理，书写规范；
4、词数：80词左右．短文开头部分已给出，不计入总词数．
Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．
【答案】Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．
In the fields，a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levels．In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit，they are busy growing plants．Meanwhile，in hospitals，doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and night．Besides，they also take good care of the old．（医生）In our daily life，we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect people．（警察）As for scientists，they concentrate more on scientific studies to invent something useful and raise our living standards．（科学家）As students，what should we do to build our country？I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country。
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍为建设美丽中国，实现中国梦，农民，医生，警察和科学家怎样做贡献的。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Now all the Chinese people are……，they are busy……，we can see……，I think……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了为了实现中国梦，中国人正在努力做贡献，接下来介绍农民、医生、警察和科学家如何做贡献的，最后表示我们作为学生应该做的事。此处make e fforts to do sth, a large number of, be busy doing sth. try one’s best, take good care of, concentrate on, make contributions to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
19．（·江苏中考模拟）某英语报开展“How to deal with the exam stress?”征文比赛，请你根据表格中的提示内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。
注意：
1. 词数90左右，短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 表格最后一栏中省略部分须用1-2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥。
How to deal with the exam stress
Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us.
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【答案】How to Deal with the Exam Stress
Everyone may have the exam stress．A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us．If we have proper stress，we can think actively and work harder．Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them．So we can pass the exams easily．
However，if we have too heavy stress，we can't sleep well at night and we may feel too tired．We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end．
In my opinion，to deal with stress，we'd better plan and prepare well．We should also form some good habits，such as enough exercise and healthy diets．Then we'll feel relaxed and do well in the exams．
【解析】
试题分析：本书面表达以“How to deal with the exam stress”为题写一篇作文。在题目中给出了一张表格，需要用正确的英语将表格中的内容表达出来。分析表格可以看到，这篇作文的内容主要有三个方面，第一个是适当的压力对我们是有好处的；第二个是过多的压力对我们有害；最后发表自己的看法，如何来应对压力。因此这篇作文可以分为三段来写，这样可以使整个文章的结构有层次。在每一段中加上具体的内容，使段落更加充实。最后还要补充两点自己的观点。全文需要使用一般现在时态，第一人称来写。注意多使用一些好的句式、短语，增强文章的表现力。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的范文。作者按照题目要求把表格中的内容完整的表达出来，并加上了自己的看法。作者将整篇短文分成了三个部分，首先写的是适当的压力对我们有利。这里作者主要使用的句型或短语有besides，还用到了一些复合句，如条件状语从句等；接下来作者写的是过多的压力的害处，段首先用however来进行转折，然后使用了一个复合句if we have too heavy stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired.虽然
