时当月色【答案】Last year, I watched the most beautiful movie of my life at an IMAX theater in Beijing. On the giant screen in front of me, a true story from history and amazing filmmaking came together to give me a very meaningful experience.
The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during WWII. As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the theater.
From the touching musical score and impressive images seen on the screen, to the heartache and pride felt by the soldiers, this movie left me a beautiful memory that I will never forget.
【解析】
试题分析：本文以＂遇见美＂为主题的短文，谈谈生活中遇见美的一次经历，所以句子的主语是第一人称单数，句子的谓语动词用一般过去时，要注意不要遗漏要点，要注意上下文的衔接，用自己熟悉的短语和句式。
写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：in front of sb在某人面前；give sb.sth给某人某物；用了that引导的定语从句，如：The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during WWII.用了as和as if引导的从句，如：As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the theater.增加了文章的亮点。
14．（·四川成都外国语学校中考模拟）写作。
Having studied in this school for almost three years, you are about to graduate （毕业）. There must be something that you will always remember. Please write a passage about your Junior school life. The following points should be included.
1. How your junior school life is.
2. Things/moments that you won’t f orget.
3. The regrets in the three years.
4. Plans for your future.
5. A natural ending.
【答案】I'm lucky to study in this beautiful school. The teachers are great. They always try to
make their lessons lively and interesting. The classmates are lovely and friendly. The school life is rich and colorful. They make me happy every day. In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. I do well in the exams. I am good at communicating and I like to make friends with others. However, I have problems, too. I spent less time sports. So in the future I will do more sports and become stronger. Thank you my teachers and classmates. Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.
【解析】学生们已经度过了三年的初中生活，在这三年里，一定有一些事是他们无法忘记的。这篇作文要求学生们介绍一下自己的初中生活。题目中列出了一些要点，如初中生活的感受、难忘的事情或时刻、后悔的事情、未来的计划，然后再加上一个自然的结尾。写作时，我们就可以利用这些要点来组织语言，充实文章的内容。通过分析可知，这篇短文应以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主，注意谓语动词形式的变化。另一个难点是英语表达和汉语习惯是不一样的，不能逐词翻译，而应从句式整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型。可以多用简单句，如主谓宾结构、主系表结构等，点缀一些并列句和复合句或较高级的句型，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。合理安排文章结构，注意语句之间的衔接，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，要点全面，并且结构安排合理，层次清晰。短文首先介绍了自己对三年初中生活、老师以及同学们的感受；然后介绍了自己在这三年里后悔的事情；接下来是对未来的计划以及对老师和同学们的祝福。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，谓语动词形式变化准确，语法规范，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中长短句结合，使文章富于变化，有节奏感。短文中还使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. 、In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. 、I do well in the exams. I am good at communicating and I like to make friends with others.、 However, I have problems, too.、 So in the future I will do more sports and become stronger. 、Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! 、The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future.等。
15．（·黑龙江中考模拟）书籍是人类进步的阶梯，是屹立在知识海洋里的灯塔。英国著名作家培根曾经说过：“阅读使人充实。”可见阅读在每个人的成长过程中都起着至关重要的
作用。请以“Reading Is Important for Us”为题，用英语写一篇短文。要点如下：1. 读书的重要原因；2. 你在生活中是如何阅读的
注意：1. 词数在80~100词之间；2. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
【答案】Reading Is Important for Us
There is a famous saying, “Reading makes full man.”
Reading is very important in our life. It can not only improve our happiness of life but also
increase our knowledge. It is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language. When I was young, I was interested in reading. So I have been good at writing since my childhood. How to read books? We can do something that follows.
First, we should develop the habit of reading. Second, we must pay much attention to books we choose. Reading books do more good than harm to us. So let’s start reading more from now on!【解析】本文属于话题作文，要表达阅读的重要性。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如not only...but also..., one of+the 形容词最高级+名词复数, be interested in, be good at, develop a good habit, pay attention to以及from now on等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
16．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达
越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活,改善了我们的生活,但同时也带来了很多问题,如塞车和
车祸,给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生,我们应该怎样做呢?
请写一篇有关交通安全的短文（80字左右）
内容包含：1.遵守交通规则,如走人行道/过斑马线。
2.别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。
3.劝父母不能酒后驾车。
4.你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。
参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线
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【答案】With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.
We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.
【解析】本文属于给出一个主题，对这个主题的相关内容进行论述，谈论有关交通安全的相关内容。实际上就是要求书写一份倡议书。人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料，确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，并补充个人的观点。注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，丰富文章的文采。可能用到的词组：more and more, heavy traffic, obey the rules, look right and left, tell sb. not to do sth., walk on sidewalks等等。
17．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，即将结束在美国的交换学习，回国前你想给住家妈妈Sarah写封感谢信，告诉她你什么时候回国，为什么感谢她，以及你的感受。
提示词语： help, care, communicate, drive to hospital, own family
提示要点：When are you going to leave?
Why do you want to say ‘thank you’ to her?
How do you feel?
Dear Sarah,
I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you.
Thanks again for taking care of me so well.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sarah,
I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. I am going to leave the US next Tuesday morning. I really want to say thanks to you because of your help and care during my stay here. I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in communicating with others in English, and I will never
forget you drove me to the hospital in the late night when I didn’t feel well.
Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.”
Thanks again for taking care of me so well.
【解析】
此文为提纲式作文，文章属于感谢信。文章可分为三段，第一段表明写信的目的；第二段分析感谢的具体原因；第三段写出你在住家妈妈Sarah家里的感受。文章用第一人称来写，时态主要用一般过去时和一般将来时。
