暮烟疏雨之际1) 俺当过班长：I worked as the class monitor and help teachers handle with class affairs(不知道如果连续五个复试者都是班长，谁是排长?)
2) 俺是学生会主席：From 2005 to 2007, I was the president of Campus Painting Association, in charge of compiling rules of the association.(全是主席，哪是谁副主席?)
3) 俺积极参与了 ：I’m also a participant of a wide range of campus activities.(您不是主席兼职班长吗，怎么突然又成“跟班儿”了呢?)
4) 俺唱过红歌：说这个只能说您经常考研，太不了解国内时事了 sing the revolutionary songs
5) 做过村官给村长提过建议：这个嘛 .，给县委书记提建议还差不多，work as a village official, my job duty is to give professional advice to the village master(secretary in the County Committee)
6) 我的成绩是全优：I got straight As. I study hard to keep an average GPA of 4.2 and a position within the top 3 percent of my class.(您不是全优吗?怎么平均分又4.2啦?前后不一致啊，选一句吧!)
7) 在英语演讲比赛中得过一等奖：I won the First Prize in the English Speaking Contest.(即使是二等奖，那您的语音也得过得去吧?)
8) 三好学生：three good student是“三个好学生”的意思(单复数还用错了)、姑且用Three Merits Student撮合着吧，其实用Excellent student谁都听得懂。
