loading?5.conciseness
--be brief
unnecessary words1) cut out unnecessary repetitionempty phrase2) use appropriate(合适的) language
?6.emphasis --emphasize your point
?coordination 并列结构?subordination 从属结构
?sentence ending 强调末尾?parallelism 平行结构
?active verb
?choosing the right subject
showing & telling
showing
Ways of telling a story
Dramatizea scene (片面,突出想强
调的)
telling
Summarizewhat happened
Create a dialogue (为中心服务)More vivid
Reader—experience the scene
directlyShort narrative = showing
Longer narrative = showing + telling
Include many eventsand details
Short historical narratives
a person’s life
?1.be brief account of
the history of a family
the establishment & development of an organization