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Unit1 话题写作专练
5月1日，你们班组织了一次郊游。请根据表格提示，发挥想象，写一篇英语日记，记述这次假期旅行。
Date Place Activities Thursday beach swim, play beach volleyball, eat seafood Weather People Feeling fine friendly great 要求：1. 要求齐全，可适当发挥； 2. 70词左右。
【参考范文】
Thursday, May 1st
The weather was fine today. I went to the beach for a trip with my classmates. There were many people there on vacation. They were friendly to each other. At first, we swam happily in the sea. Then we played beach volleyball. When we were tired, we lay on the beach and relaxed. At noon, we felt a little hungry, so we went to have some seafood. It was very delicious!
All of us had a great time!
【范文点评】
本文作者能够准确地运用提示中所给的短语和单词，并加以适当发挥，写出自己当天的活动，最后表达了自己的感受，前后呼应。具体亮点有： (1)多种句式的综合运用避免就了句式单一，同时也使文章更具有可读性。 (2)词组on vacation, be friendly to, each other, lie on the beach, at noon, have a great time等的运用，提高了作文的档次。
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